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UPDATE:
Thanks to the amazing ^NicSwaner for the Daily Deviation. My first ever one - and this poem was written in the sort of manic rush it describes, after I'd come home from watching The Social Network and had Sorkinian quick talking in my head.

The Explosion Coil
An entry in The Hyper Poem
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Daily Deviation

Given 2013-03-19
The Explosion Coil by =tetrarchangel is one entry in an amazing display of hypertext poetry, a form of interactive literature in which the reader is led through the writing by choosing when to proceed to the next poem by clicking the links embedded in each phrase of the poem. In this Hyper Poem, every phrase connects to the beginning of a poem, and each poem contains a moral. ( Featured by Nichrysalis )
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winterhill Featured By Owner May 23, 2013
love it
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:icontetrarchangel:
tetrarchangel Featured By Owner May 23, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Thanks.
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PaniCrusnik09 Featured By Owner Mar 23, 2013
Very eloquent, marvelously accurate, you've perfectly captured the Muse.
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:icontetrarchangel:
tetrarchangel Featured By Owner Apr 22, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you. It was a huge undertaking, the complete Hyper Poem, but I was very happy with it.
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farsh-nuke Featured By Owner Mar 22, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
I'm not really a fan of poetry, even if I do give it a go from time to time, so I can't judge this poem fairly or academically but the power and emotion your choice of words creates is very evident, something very much prescriptive of pace and delivery. I see it and feel it like lazy Saturday afternoons riding down Knaphill on my bike, the lyrics to don't stop me now buzzing through my head, feeling me with a frantic gleeful energy, nowadays only matched by hearing the Doctor Who theme tune. You're a good instinctual writer, it'd be interesting to what you're like at prose.
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tetrarchangel Featured By Owner Apr 14, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Well, there's a ton in the gallery.
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:iconl-inque:
L-Inque Featured By Owner Mar 19, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Genius! This'll keep me busy for a couple of hours. Congrats on the reward for your hard work.:)
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:icontetrarchangel:
tetrarchangel Featured By Owner Apr 22, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Hope you got on really well with it.
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:iconl-inque:
L-Inque Featured By Owner Apr 23, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
I did.
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:icontetrarchangel:
tetrarchangel Featured By Owner Apr 24, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Super.
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:iconarchelyxs:
archelyxs Featured By Owner Mar 19, 2013
Congrats! :heart:
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tetrarchangel Featured By Owner Mar 20, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you - how many DDs have you had now, anyway? It's a few, isn't it?
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:iconarchelyxs:
archelyxs Featured By Owner Mar 21, 2013
I have four, but it's been a while :blush:
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:icontetrarchangel:
tetrarchangel Featured By Owner Apr 17, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Well, gives me something to aim for.
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:iconvespera:
vespera Featured By Owner Mar 19, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
:jawdrop:
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:icontetrarchangel:
tetrarchangel Featured By Owner Apr 22, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
I like going big with poetic projects.
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:iconkaitforest:
KaitForest Featured By Owner Mar 19, 2013   Writer
my face
exactly
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:iconryanisnasty:
ryanisnasty Featured By Owner Mar 19, 2013
Congratulations on the well deserved DD!
:huggle:
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tetrarchangel Featured By Owner Apr 22, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you very much.
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:iconwildrooms:
wildrooms Featured By Owner Mar 19, 2013
What a wonderful idea. Has the Hypertext been hard to create?
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:icontetrarchangel:
tetrarchangel Featured By Owner Apr 22, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Oh, you know, write poem, copy onto a private wiki, save as PDF, upload, the usual.
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Lucy-Merriman Featured By Owner Mar 19, 2013  Student General Artist
This is really cool :D I might be a bit too ADD to finish it, but this is really clever.
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tetrarchangel Featured By Owner Apr 22, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you.
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LostGryphin Featured By Owner Mar 19, 2013  Hobbyist Photographer
Congrats the DD
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:icontetrarchangel:
tetrarchangel Featured By Owner Apr 22, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Thanks the comment.
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buneep Featured By Owner Mar 19, 2013
Congrats on the DD! :hug:
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tetrarchangel Featured By Owner Apr 22, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you very much.
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7markus7 Featured By Owner Mar 19, 2013
your poetry speaks to me , itīs rhytm , and the very things you talk about :clap: .
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tetrarchangel Featured By Owner Apr 22, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Thanks a lot.
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Humbug-liqourish Featured By Owner Mar 19, 2013  Student Writer
This is amazing!
I could get lost in the maze of words.

(So well deserved)
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tetrarchangel Featured By Owner Apr 22, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
I hope you do get pleasantly lost.
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:iconlintu47:
lintu47 Featured By Owner Mar 19, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Congrats on the well deserved DD! :dalove:
Have a nice day! :heart:
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:icontetrarchangel:
tetrarchangel Featured By Owner Apr 22, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you.
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:iconlintu47:
lintu47 Featured By Owner Apr 22, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
    My pleasure :happybounce:
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LilFred Featured By Owner Mar 19, 2013
That's so interesting! I'm gonna play again with it! *_*
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tetrarchangel Featured By Owner Mar 19, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Have fun!
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neurotype Featured By Owner Mar 19, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
I am very much fascinated by this, I'ma have to hit it all up when I have a chance. So far I'm getting the impression that it's strongest with the shortest, most fleeting imagery.
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tetrarchangel Featured By Owner Mar 19, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you, there's a fair bit to dig into, hopefully none of it too obscure.
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