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The Explosion Coil by tetrarchangel The Explosion Coil by tetrarchangel

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UPDATE:
Thanks to the amazing ^NicSwaner for the Daily Deviation. My first ever one - and this poem was written in the sort of manic rush it describes, after I'd come home from watching The Social Network and had Sorkinian quick talking in my head.

The Explosion Coil
An entry in The Hyper Poem
The true version is here [link]
The ReadMe, so you can know how it works! [link]
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Given 2013-03-19
The Explosion Coil by =tetrarchangel is one entry in an amazing display of hypertext poetry, a form of interactive literature in which the reader is led through the writing by choosing when to proceed to the next poem by clicking the links embedded in each phrase of the poem. In this Hyper Poem, every phrase connects to the beginning of a poem, and each poem contains a moral. ( Featured by Nichrysalis )

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winterhill Featured By Owner May 23, 2013
love it
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tetrarchangel Featured By Owner May 23, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Thanks.
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PaniCrusnik09 Featured By Owner Mar 23, 2013
Very eloquent, marvelously accurate, you've perfectly captured the Muse.
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tetrarchangel Featured By Owner Apr 22, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you. It was a huge undertaking, the complete Hyper Poem, but I was very happy with it.
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farsh-nuke Featured By Owner Mar 22, 2013  Student Writer
I'm not really a fan of poetry, even if I do give it a go from time to time, so I can't judge this poem fairly or academically but the power and emotion your choice of words creates is very evident, something very much prescriptive of pace and delivery. I see it and feel it like lazy Saturday afternoons riding down Knaphill on my bike, the lyrics to don't stop me now buzzing through my head, feeling me with a frantic gleeful energy, nowadays only matched by hearing the Doctor Who theme tune. You're a good instinctual writer, it'd be interesting to what you're like at prose.
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tetrarchangel Featured By Owner Apr 14, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Well, there's a ton in the gallery.
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L-Inque Featured By Owner Mar 19, 2013   Writer
Genius! This'll keep me busy for a couple of hours. Congrats on the reward for your hard work.:)
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tetrarchangel Featured By Owner Apr 22, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Hope you got on really well with it.
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:iconl-inque:
L-Inque Featured By Owner Apr 23, 2013   Writer
I did.
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tetrarchangel Featured By Owner Apr 24, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Super.
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